It's cute. I don't know if it'll survive on Newgrounds, but for your target audience it should work.
It's cute. I don't know if it'll survive on Newgrounds, but for your target audience it should work.
yeah, I know its not the kind of thing newgrounds like, but hopefuly people will recognise the effort that was put in it.
The Bandits Were Awesome
Well animated. Not a whole lot of energy in this, though, particularly in the voice acting. I did enjoy watching the leader of the Bandits, though; he was pretty funny.
The Bandit Leader has Parkinson's. I hope you're happy now.
Rule!
Wally Pleasant rules, and so does this video.
Wally was really nice to let me use his music. There's a good reason he's not called Wally Dreadful, Wally Misery or Wally Dirtball!
That's enough
That last movie was front-paged as a sick joke on the rest of us who work hard on our animation. It doesn't happen often, so don't expect to get famous through half-assed junk like this. Spend more time on your material, particularly the story. Just because you think it's funny when you starts it doesn't mean it'll look that way to everyone.
It wasn't half assed ok it was full-assed get it right guys jeeze
Not a bad idea...
The format is a nice idea, but the execution is lacking. Try improving on the lighting (i.e. using more than just the camera's flash) and maybe trying some sets (unless the "bedroom floor" look was what you wanted). A more involved plot would be nice. Also, there's a left-facing arrow on the credits page that does nothing. Otherwise, it's a cute comic.
This was more of a test to see what I could do with the series. This and Episode 2. And it is supposed to be set in my bedroom, for the most part. It's supposed to be "The Toys in my room have come to life, and they're going to do whatever the fuck they want" kinda thing.
Thanks for the feedback. The lighting is especially tricky, but I have been attempting to work on it. Hopefully, Episode 2 will seem some marked improvement. That'll be appearing either later today or tomorrow.
I think that pretty much sums it up.
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